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Review:academica says:
Hi! Here from the Ravenclaw Review Battle :)

This was an interesting little prologue. I like that you gave Teddy some personality; I see him as being somewhat reserved, like his dad, but I can see a lot of Tonks in his sarcastic, idealistic manner. I like your Victoire, too; having her being sort of a spitfire is a little cliche, but the image of her hiding behind the huge book and trying to avoid Teddy made me chuckle. I suppose he'll wear her down one day :)

Anyway, this is a good start. I will be curious to see where things go from here. I did see a fair number of typos, so I'll pass along my oft-given advice to look into a beta or proofread a bit more.

-Amanda

Author's Response: I'm always glad to hear that I have an interesting beginning so thank you for that. Teddy always ends up sounding like one of Harry's children to me whenever I read him in fanfictions so I was hoping to kind of change that and make him his parents' kid.

I haven't had access for a week so I've had to make do with what electronics I had at my disposal. Needless to say, I'll be doing some editing once my computer is up and running.


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