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Review:marauder5 says:
Thank you for writing another great chapter! :) I really loved it, and it leaves me craving for more, which I guess is a good thing!

I love how Terry is trying so hard to get Tor to understand how wrong the Death Eaters really are. Discussing WW2 and the Holocaust must have been quite a wake up call, because it shows just what might happen when prejudices get out of hand, and what Voldemort might end up doing to the Muggles and Muggleborns. I always thought that Voldemort was somewhat inspired by Hitler.

Of course, Tor has been raised to believe that Muggles really are worth less than wizards, but no one can go untouched after hearing about the horrible things they did to the Jews. So it seems believable that she would start to doubt her beliefs, but I also felt like she should have tried a little bit harder to hold onto them. After all, they are imprinted into her body, her father has been brainwashing her for as long as she has lived. So I don't see her coming around just yet, but that's just me!

And Theo. I'm so torn - one part of me loves Tor and Terry together, but the other part just wants her to ditch him and finally get together with Theo! He's just so sweet, I love the fact that he saved her from Goyle. Perfect :)

And her dad is back!!! So, my guesses are that he will make her forget all about the Holocaust for a while. He'll point her in the same direction he always has, and she'll go back to her normal self. But I hope that she'll come around eventually...

That ending just makes me want to read the next chapter right away, but I'll try to be patient. I think you already know this, but I'll tell you again: you are an amazing author and I LOVE this story :)

Author's Response: Well, thank you for reading this chapter and for leaving another amazing review!!! :D

I think that Hitler and Voldemort are parallels, so it was interesting to imagine how someone who has been raised to believe in Voldemort's cause would react to learning about Hitler.

Poor Tor: she must be very confused! I think that being around someone like Terry would be a very good influence, although of course it's impossible to erase or eradicate a lifetime's worth of prejudice. Our Tor is a clever one, though, and will hopefully be an exception!!! :P

Ahh, that's interesting that there's a part of you that likes Theo and Tor together!!! We'll just have to see what happens, I suppose!! Hehe. I'm definitely still shipping Terry/Tor, at least for the present...

Interesting guesses, :). The next chapter is in the queue, so maybe you'll find out soon. Thank you so much again for reviewing, it's so lovely to log on and see new reviews, especially ones which are so thoughtful and constructive, I really love it!!! :)

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