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Review:Elleinad says:
Gosh. Loved the unusual perspective at the beginning. Didn't like you calling him Lord Malfoy. Care to explain that? I'm not sure what it was but this had a unrealistic feel to it. Also the snitch should only open to Harry's touch. Flesh memory remember? It was pretty good but definitely not your best. Urg. I can't think anymore. I liked it but I need to go cry now. See you again.

Author's Response: Elleinad,

Well, thank you so much for your review of this one-shot.

Lord Malfoy? Well, I only did that because he is quite old in this stage of his life and Lords and Ladies are titles used in England and so with his status, funds, and property, I thought it fitting. That is all. It is meant more of a respect thing than anything.

And yes, the snitch... I know about the flesh memory and all, but I kinda took 'poetic license' to bend the rules a bit so that he could see her in the end. Perhaps I should've had Harry put inside somthing else, but I still liked Dumbledore's brilliance in that it opened at the close and not just to have it to use whenever he wanted so that he would'nt have gone mad. Anyway, it isn't canon exactly, so it is right that you say it isn't realistic. Sorry about that.

And you are right, it is not one of my best. But it was written for the sad ending challenge and I think the most important piece is that even though he wanted her all his life, he was only able to have her for a few days. :( Sad, indeed.

Thanks so much for your review. Much appreciated as always.
Dark Whisper

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