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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there! Tag!

Wow, this was such an interesting start! I've never read one that centers around Rose as an adult, and especially with so many children! And Scorpius is an Unspeakable! Very neat!

I think you did a really good job getting the story started. There's already so much to wonder about. It seems like Rose and Scorpius may be on rocky territory, but maybe that's just because the graduation was already stressful and she was worried about her little one being disappointed. It did open up a lot of good questions about their marriage and what Rose and him mean to one another.

I think that this was a very cute moment to capture as well as a serious one to show what Scorpius misses for his career. Children are so forgiving until they're disappointed too many times, then they don't even care anymore. I hope Scorpius isn't always as absent, because I can't help but feel sad for the little ones :(.

Rose seems like an incredibly loving mother! I think that fits her perfectly, and I love how much she's working to keep her kids happy.

This was an excellent start, dear!

Jami

Author's Response: hey!

Thanks for the review!

im glad you liked it =) I tried to bring in things about their lives and give readers an idea of what their personalities.

thanks alot for the review! it really meant a bunch.

Mya


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