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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Before anything else, I wanted to make sure my last review didn't come across as agressive, because I really did like the ending (even though I'm hopeless for a 'ride off into the sunset' ending)...

However, where I likd your ending of Yellow, I loved the ending of this! It was fun to have a chapter from Dom's point of view.

Scorpius' appearance made my day. "Call my agent", my big toe. Pulling the line on Rose, then on her own cousin, tsk tsk. And letting Dom pay for the tea -- I'm sure Narcissa Malfoy must be turning over in her grave at his lack of manners.

I liked the fact that you gave us an exterior opinion on Darcy and Albus. Again, there's this sense of closure and continuity in your ending, which is great, as you end the story but still leave space for our imagination.

This was a lovely conclusion to an even lovelier story here are some hearts to thank you for making my days with your amazing writing &hearts &hearts &hearts

(Also, can I say how excited and gleeful I am Lily and Rose are in Rome? That's where I might be in a few months!)

Author's Response: No, no, I didn't see it that way :) I just felt bad that I was going to be letting you down a bit by not promising a sequel, that's all. Hopefully that's not the case. You did like the ending.

Scorpius is awkward in his own way, just like most of the others. I wanted to give Dominique her moment in the sun, her chance to be the leading lady if only for a short time. It's great that you liked the way this wrapped up and enjoyed getting, as you said, an outside perspective on how everyone ended up.

Thanks for another wonderful review, Val! (And I am so, so jealous! Enjoy yourself!!)


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