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Review:patronus_charm says:
I'm going to be sad about not having anymore Darcy/Albus times, as it was a nice change to the usual next gen I see, but at least I can make up for it by finally getting round to Post Scriiptum ;)

It seemed fitting that the story focused on Dom in the last chapter, as she was floating in the background for most of it by playing the calm cousin or match maker so I liked learning more about her :)

I liked the letter from Darcy it seemed to reveal so much about what had been going on without it getting boring. I can see that Darcy and Albus' relationship is going well if they're in Scotland, as is Lily and Rose's career if they're hitting Rome now.

It was a nice insight into their lives and to see that they were going well :)

I loved the way Dom was looking at that photo of Scorpius, it seemed as if she was beginning to like him then, and I was wondering whether she was getting a crush on him and how annoyed Rose would be about it.

Then for him to turn up and to offer to take her to have tea was just brilliant. It just seemed so fitting and it was a great bit of drama to end the story on. It almost as if it was suggesting there was going to be a sequel, are my assumptions are correct?

Oh well, either way I really enjoyed this story and it was nice to the usual next gen I come across ;D

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hi Kiana! Sorry this response is coming so late!

It's so great to hear that you liked the story as a whole and enjoyed this final chapter. I meant for it to be like an epilogue, and you know how fond I am of perspective-switching, so it felt right to let Dominique have her moment in the spotlight. Yep, everyone is doing well, and I'm pleased that you were happy to see that resolution.

Dominique isn't impervious to Scorpius's charm and model looks, but his self-righteous attitude annoys her. It was amusing to imagine her stumbling over herself trying to figure out what to do with him right there in front of her. In a way, then, Dominique has her own resolution--an interesting future.

I actually don't have a sequel planned for this story. I'm not one to ever close the door prematurely, so if I ever got an idea, I might go with it. For now, though, this is the end.

Thanks for the lovely review, Kiana :)

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