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Review:potterfan310 says:
OHMYGOD!

Neville and Hannah = no more :'( So sad, poor Chase

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Brit picking - "My mom has" and you said mom instead of mum a couple of other times.

"Louisís" - You don't need the S on the end after the appostrophy.

My favourite part was Louis' closet. I love that he's a secret One Direction fan. :)

I think the I.L is really cool and original. I've never heard of anything like it before!! I'm guessing the I.L stands for instant letter?

Aww Molly's talk with Neville = so sweet. I love that she's trying to get him and Luna together. It was very Molly-ish of her to cook for an army of well!!!

11/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

Author's Response: Oh dear, I always forget to translate my American speech for British sayings ;(

As for "Louis's", it's grammatically correct either way, and I like to write it that way so that it's clear that it's the French pronunciation :) Thank you for the heads up, though!

I always saw Louis as a One Direction fan, not sure why x) I picture him having Liam as a favorite, I must say.

I'm not quite sure where I came up with the idea for I.L., but once I did I thought it was a great idea and immediately wanted to include it in my story. I'm glad you think it's cool!! (:

Ah, yes, I LOVE Molly. It's to the point where I practically picture her as being semi-omniscient, haha.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! x


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