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Review:MissMdsty says:
Talk about a sad story. This absolutely broke my heart! It's hard losing a parent, but being a parent yourself and explaining it to your child...

I remember I was young when one of my Grandfathers passed and I had a similar reaction, not understanding why he wouldn't wake up.

You conveyed a really raw emotion here, in the eulogy, in Neville losing his temper but eventually coming to terms that he must accept it and let it pass. It was written so naturally, so beautifully that it almost made me cry.

There were no pauses in the story flow, the dialogue and the explanations were very well thought out (I might use them for my own kids one day) and even Hannah's outburst was very realistic.

All in all, another lovely story! Good job dear!

Author's Response: It does break your heart, doesn't it? I wanted to write a really sad story though... (hopefully that doesn't sound too horrible) lol.

aw I'm so glad you liked it and thought everything was realistic! That definitely makes me really happy :)


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