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Review:gingersnape says:
Oh my goodness. The imagery in this was so clear and I could just picture the whole thing without even trying. The dust settling in and the grief. The grief. You say so much about his pain and conflicted feelings with so few words that I felt like I too was lost and confused. I didn't expect Hannah to help him, as, like you said, they never really talked. The connection, however, felt like a weight was being lifted off my shoulders and it made me realize just how immersed in the story I was! This flowed really beautifully and I can't wait for the next chapter!

It was angsty and powerful, but in the way that made me smile at how beautiful raw human emoticons can be, rather than the angst that weighs you down and makes you feel bad. This was such a wonderful first chapter and it flowed really well! I didn't catch any spelling or grammar mistakes, so hats off, and I generally enjoyed it the whole way through. :)


Author's Response: Hiya!

I'm sooo pleased you liked it! This is definitely one of my favourite things that I've written, it's my baby! George's life following George's death seems to be a bit of a blank page so I tried to convey what he might have felt during that first difficult year. I'm just so pleased you think I managed to do it well!

Thanks for reviewing Annie! :)

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