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Review:ShadowRose says:
Due to a series of random clicking, I ended up on this one-shot - and I'm sure glad I did!

The way you portray Moody is just perfect, in my opinion. It's exactly how I would see his brain working, and you just put it onto paper (or computer screen, I guess!) magnificently.

The description in here is excellent - especially considering this one-shot's only 700 words.

That's another thing that amazes me: how much detail and character you manage to pack into such a short story. I feel like I've been reading a novel about him, for all the information about his life that this one-shot shares.

I definitely feel that he would have died smiling. He was happiest in the battlefield, so dying for his comrades would be, in his opinion, the best way to die.

Moody is just one of those characters who kind of piques you interest as you're reading the HP series, and I think you do an excellent job of giving him the depth that J.K. left out.

Great job - I really enjoyed reading this!


Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm pleased that you were drawn in enough to give it a read and that you enjoyed the story. That's what an author loves to hear.

I'm so happy you like the details of my imagery and characterization. This was just a little burst of an idea, and I don't know that I could have sustained it for a longer piece. I do find Moody interesting and I liked exploring him a little bit. It's great to hear that you liked the way he smiled as he came to face death. I like to think of it as his last hurrah.

Thank you for this really wonderful review :)


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