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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
This was the cutest story I have ever read. Rose and Scorpius have never been more adorable as a couple and you know, I did actually think that Rose had a stomach flu until the healer asked when she last had her period so...I wasn't really expecting the whole pregnancy part. I really liked the way you portrayed them as a couple, still with the banter and the witty comebacks but sort of still in the honeymoon stage of their relationship and on a high.

I didn't spot any grammatical errors and this read really well and comfortably. The dialogue felt really natural and uplifting - kind of like a story you would read on a rainy day as a pick me up. I thought that the way you wrote Scorpius's reaction to finding out Rose was pregnant was really cute, I kind of had a flashback to watching a video about this couple finding out they are pregnant after thinking they couldn't have a child. It made me feel all fuzzy inside which is a nice feeling to have :P

Super adorable and downright perky - I'd love to read some more of your work in the near future, really great job! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it! I wanted it to be sweet and just happy, even though the couple had to face some nerves along the way!

Thank you for the review!


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