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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Hey Aditi!

Sorry Im sooo late!! School is really getting to me and my time reading and reviewing :(

Anyway, I really liked how you started this! One thing I really loved was the fact that there was no Teddy/Victorie/Dommie triangle thing going on here, or at least as mentioned in this chapter.

Although I don't mind the triangle, sometimes I feel that people rely on too much when writing about Teddy in general so great work there!

I like the way you characterized Dommie! She's strong and a journalist which is quite different from other Dominique characters I have read.

I enjoyed reading the way you differentiated between Dommie being scared of werewovles and not actually hating them. This was a very strong and powerful way to portray her as a character!

Overall I think you have a great story here. It has a very effective beginning with a cliff hanger in the end, just begging for me to read more :D

I'll be back for more soon and again sorry for the delay! =)

Mya

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing, apologies for the delay in responding.

I am pleased you liked the way I started this. Yes, there's no Teddy/Vic/Dom triangle. Triangles are cliche xP

I am glad you like Dom's character, and that you found this an effective beginning.

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing once again, and I look forward to your comments on future chapters!


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