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Review:missclaire17 says:
It's always interesting, to read about people with affairs. I don't ship Teddy/Dominique because I am an avid Teddy and Victoire shipper, but it's rather interesting, the fact that Teddy thinks that Dominique should still be there for him when HE is married. I like that you explored what Teddy felt in Dominique leaving him because she was strong enough to want to have a life on her own and not be with Teddy when he is married to Victoire.

What you could also do is explore Teddy and Victoire's relationship as well; obviously, they're married so if Teddy doesn't want a divorce, then he might still love Victoire in some way, yet he is cheating on her with Dominique.

I think this one-shot is good. You could take it a little further, but it's very nice (:

Author's Response: Heyyy Claire!

Im glad you like it :P Personally I dont ship Teddy/Dommie either but this story kinda just fit for them =)

Actually they weren't married, they were only engaged but I see why would you mistake tht since I probably didn't make it too clear :P

Im glad you liked it! I was thiking of writing another sequel OS so thank you!

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