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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey Amanda. I don't know how I got here but I am happy I did!

Wow. Just wow. I literally have no words. A product on inability to sleep? I should try writing when I'm not able to sleep more often, maybe then I'll be half as good as you xP

On a serious note, this was a very well-written one-shot. I absolutely loved it. The idea of Lavender taking the love potion to make her love herself is so unique (and a little depressing)! I really liked it!

Your descriptions were, as always, wonderful. The angst was not out there and yet surrounded the entire piece. I loved the entire idea of "this is not a love story/this is a love story." It was all just so perfect.

I really don't know what else to say except that this is officially one of my favourite one-shots on the archives now. I really loved it! It was a pleasure read it. Once again, you've proved that you're truly a talented writer.

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi Angie! I was thinking about dropping by your thread to get your feedback on this, so I'm pleased to see that you found your way over here!

I don't usually turn to writing when I'm unable to sleep (and I don't often wake up at 5:30), but the moment just felt right this time so I went with it. I hope the final product is coherent!

I don't know if you could even really use a love potion this way, but it seemed poetic. It's meant to be quite depressing, like Lavender's life, and I'm glad it was still enjoyable for you, especially the descriptions and the repetition of the love story/Beauty and the Beast theme.

Thanks again for your amazing review!

-Amanda


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