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Severus and Beth had a row. Wow, that was something I never expected from the story. This was quite surprising for me, actually. Anyway, I believe that lovers do fight sometimes and that is good for them, =]
Aah Rachel, I wish you could make Severus turn good for Beth! =[ I like him so much in this story and I can't believe he's going to be a Death Eater, assuming that you're going to keep this strictly canon.
Otherwise I can't wait to see how they'll make up with each other!

Ashwini

Author's Response: So many people write romances and forget to include the realities of love into their romances -- like fights, for example. And that's one of the prime reasons I wanted to include one, although it did go well with the plot. From the very, very beginning, I wanted to write a love story REALISTICALLY. It meant moving perhaps slower than many people wanted, but so be it. Love isn't always quick!

You'll see what becomes of Severus. ;) I wish I could have made him good too, of course, but at the same time, it feeds back into what I said above about realistic writing. The world is not black and white, and he is perhaps one of the grayest of all the world's characters.

I'm excited for you to read on! I love when people review like you're doing; it's like getting to re-read the story for myself through different eyes, which is so cool. ♥ Thank you for reviewing!


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