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Review:marauder5 says:
I'm so glad I took the time to check this out. For some reason I didn't have that high hopes (which is weird considering how much I love The Girl From Slytherin, haha!) but you surprised me. This was just AMAZING. There's no other word for it.

One of the reasons why I loved was the fact that I've never read anything like this before, anything of the hours after the Battle from the point of view of this side, of the dark side. It was everything you could have expected, and the fact that it was tied together with The Girl From Slytherin only made it better.

I loved Nott's thoughts of his son (Pyxis, I guess), and I was surprised to see that both he and Astoria were fighting for the good side. Interesting. I wonder what will bring them to that - and I can't help but wonder if the lanky dark-haired boy is Terry Boot. It makes me even more excited to read more of that story ;)

I can't quite put my finger on it, but there's something about your language and your style that just fits these characters so well. It's perfect for Mr. Nott and it's perfect for Tor in your other story. It's fantastic.

I will definitely read the next chapter of this when I get the time. This was a brilliant start, and I hope you'll win the challenge, because you deserve it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your lovely praise!!! It really means a lot because I have been also strangely on the shelf about this short story collection so far. I've been thinking so much about how Girl from Slytherin will turn out, like what will happen to Tor and her friends after the Battle of Hogwarts, so I guess I needed to get out some of those ideas even if it's a little pre-mature. Also, I needed a break from Tor's voice, even if it's just for a chapter or two :P

I loved imagining Mr. Nott's thoughts after the Battle, and his turmoil. Since history is always written by the winners, it's way more fun to write this story from the losers' perspective!! It's so nice to hear that you liked this voice for Mr. Nott-honestly, it really means a lot!!! :)

The next chapter is pretty different, but that was part of the fun of this challenge, writing chapters that appear completely seperate from one another. Thank you so much for reading this and writing such a wonderful review, it pretty much made my day!!! :)

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