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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Oh my goodness Alli, this was so good! I think you matched Snape's character perfectly and you did a great job with expressing his emotions and memories.

All of the memories you showed really gave me chills. They seemed so realistic and something that could have been canon for the both of them :) I loved the way you wrote their friendship and even though I ship Lily/James, this really had me pulled towards Lily/Snape :)

I feel so unbelievably bad for Snape and really wished it could have turned out better for him. I'm just glad he was able to show Harry that he wasn't all bad. I liked the short interactions between those two as well, especially how intense the stare into Harry's eyes was.

This was such a wonderful one shot and I'm so glad I read t!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda!

I was really worried about my characterization of both Snape and Lily in this story so I'm glad you thought Snape was in character. I tried to focus on the fact that they did have a strong friendship despite Snape secretly wanting more for so many years. I love Lily/James as well, but I can certainly see Lily/Snape working too if Snape wouldn't have joined the Death Eaters. I'm glad you liked the ending with Snape looking into Harry's eyes since it's such an essential part of the story. Thank you for your incredibly kind review!

Alli


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