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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hi, I really like your story so far. For what it's worth, I read all of it in one go, so that's how much I like it.;)

The way everyone started off as aquaintances instead of friends, then gradually got to know each other was a nice touch to the overall story.

Your characters are all believable and engaging, and you've done a good job giving each of them different personalities, so I can easily tell the difference between characters, so well done on that.

The only CC I can give you is perhaps some grammatical/spelling errors here and there, nothing a quick read through can't cure. :)

Oh, and also, I'm a bit unclear on the pairings here. Is it a Giana/Albus and Giselle/Scorpius, or is there going to be any ScoRose, which means Giselle/Albus/Giana? Of course, if I'm not meant to know, then you are doing a very good job on keeping it hidden from us poor readers!

Author's Response: I apologize for not responding sooner, I was on vacation! Nevertheless, thank you for the brilliant review, it was a wonderful surprise. I am honored that you were motivated to finish the entire story in one go, i was a bit worried that people might get bored halfway. You've made that fear vanish, so thank you once again.

Another fear of mine (I have quite a few of them regarding this story) was not making the characters interesting and, more importantly, relatable. I'm really glad that you liked all their personalities.

As for my horrendous grammar and spelling, i apologize profusely and promise to review the chapters as soon as possible.

Lastly, the pairings. I've read far too many stories where one figures out the pairings before the third chapter. I really wanted the pairings to be a bit unpredictable, making the reader think about it for awhile. Your confusion means that I've succeeded. Great job :)

Once again, thank you ever so much for this wonderful review and read on!

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