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Review:MissMdsty says:
I'm baaack! First thing's first, I read this in the morning and I'm drooling at the thought of iced mocha, or maybe a caramel latte? Basically, I need a no-calorie charm. Now you know what to get me for my birthday!

I loved this chapter. Edie is as funny as she ever was (Ancient chinese proverb :P) and her frustration at Wood only makes her funnier (I know it's not nice to laugh at another's misery... I've had to deal with people like that before and it's no fun).

I'm very curious at this point what happened to the Oliver who taught our Harry how to play Quidditch. Something must've happened to make him fall off the band wagon. I'm just curious what it was.

I dislike Rose. As a character, she is the kind of person who is so nice and smiley that you just KNOW she wants something. Really, nobody is that nice. I have a feeling she'll be trouble.

Oh and you ended it on a cliffhanger. I like how Edie is the kind girl that when she does something, it's like she has a sign popping out of her head saying "I'm guilty!". I wonder what she's gotten herself into this time!

Lovely chapter as usual, m'dear! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hello dear! Thanks so much for coming back to check out my story. Same here--I could really use one of those coffees right now! I imagine that the no-calorie charm has some kind of hiccup, like maybe it makes things taste really plain :P

Ah, yes. I finally touch on what made Oliver the way he is now (kind of) in a much later chapter... haha. But that's all I'll say for now ;D

I dislike Rose too. But she's so fun to write. It's really interesting getting into the head of a character like that.

Hahaha, that's a good point. Edie is definitely the all-signs-point-to kind of guity person... she's certainly lacking in the grace department.


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