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Review:nott theodore says:
Review 200, I think!

I was really excited for this chapter, when Helena and Venn finally get the chance to meet. The two of them have been told so little about each other but the expectation has built up in their minds. All the two know of each other really is their outward appearance, and of course they are already expecting things because of that.

I love the descriptions of the scenes in this chapter. You paint the picture so well that I can imagine it really clearly in my mind, and it seems really beautiful.

I don't know if I've mentioned it before but I really like all of the names that your characters have. They sound really authentic and I like the fact that you've researched them and their meanings.

I'm excited to see how the relationship between Venn and Helena develops!

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: It is indeed! Thanks once again for that :)

I think both Helena and Venn are awkward in their own ways. You'll have to read on to see if that feeling ebbs away, of course, but I'm happy that you like watching them get to know each other as they test what they've come to expect based on what they've been told about one another.

Thank you for your compliments on the imagery and the name selection as well. I appreciate your very sweet review!

-Amanda


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