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Review:nott theodore says:
This chapter was brilliant again. Everything you wrote seemed to fit in with what I've read about Helena Ravenclaw and I really like the relationship between her and her mother. They're both highly intelligent women and have been lucky to have an education that women at the time never dreamed of. I can understand why she feels so isolated from everyone around her.

I really enjoy all the details that you've written in this chapter, especially the titles of the books that I know came from this time. The little references are very clever. I enjoy the way that you've already established a relationship between Salazar and Rowena, as we don't find out much about Slytherin except that he's 'the bad guy', and I know he must have had good qualities for the four Founders to be friends.

I like the way that you've established the connection between Venn and Helena already; both are young and frustrated with their lives, and both are constantly having matches made for them. I'll be really interested to read about their meeting and see how their relationship develops.

nott theodore :)

Author's Response: I think Rowena and Helena do provide an interesting look into what things would have been like for women, magical or otherwise, during this period. Helena has definitely been very lucky in that she has an education and an inheritance; however, like any noblewoman, she is still constrained by societal expectations, and she doesn't get to make a lot of her own decisions, which frustrates her a lot.

Thanks! Again, I did a bit of research to try to find things that were published around this time.

At this point, the four Founders still get along quite well. Rowena and Salazar have nothing but positive feelings about the idea of uniting their houses through the marriage of Venn and Helena, if the children will consent to it.

Glad you're intrigued to read on. The ride is just beginning. Thanks for another kind review!

-Amanda


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