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Review:DancingMooncalf says:
Hey, I'm here to deliver a review you ordered!

I like the theme of this story already. I'm studying to become a teacher and I know how hard it can be to teach. It must be very interesting to read a story from the perspective of a new teacher. I'm very curious what the future chapters will bring.

I must say you had me wrapped up in the story rather easy, the plot and the story is basically writing itself in my head write now, so I really want to read on and see what you made of it. It's a really nice start.

If it weren't for the fact that it's half past 12 at night I would read the next chapter. I like Greg, he's a bit insecure and I totally get that. Becoming a teacher is a big responsebillaty, I wouldn't want to be asked that without being trained in it. Especially when teaching teenagers. That's not going to be easy. I wishe Greg the best of luck!
He won't get an easy start either, with the Weasley/Potter clan running around the castle.

He must have been the first muggleborn to become a Slythering too, that changes my view on the Slytherin house :)
He seems really nice, Greg. I enjoyed reading about him this chapter.

I guess what I'm saying here is generally 'I like it'. You may ask me to read more chapters, though I can tell you I probably will without you asking me.

thanks for the great read!
Maya

Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for the review. Good to an encounter a fellow teacher - there are a few things in here which have been lifted one way or another from real life. He is going to need the luck.

He's not the first muggleborn, but one of the first... if you enjoy this one, you can check out the prequel which explains how he ended up in Slytherin in the first place!

Thanks again

Sheriff


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