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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is such a riveting, engaging and funny chapter!! I loved it! It had me gripped from start to finish with the great characters and quirky narrative.

You get the dynamics of the work just right - very realistic office life and chit chat - and you introduce us to the story leisurely - creating tension from the very start by giving us some answers but making the reader ask more questions. The dialogue is really interesting, and the off hand statements and opinions to each character/speech is brilliant (e.g Typical rock star.) It makes it even more humourous and quite a unique style of writing.

Overall, totally original genre, and choice of character, and a lovely theme you've set. Well done :)

Author's Response: Wow! This review really made my day!

I tried my best to create a realistic workplace and interesting characters, because I really wanted to set the scene well. Molly makes a lot of off hand statements and sometimes she has trouble controlling what she actually says - I think the filter between her brain and mouth doesn't always work - but I think everyone has those thoughts in their mind, and they can be quite amusing.

Thank you so much for taking the time to review and make such lovely comments!

nott theodore :)


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