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Review:caoty says:
Hey!

Right, first up, I owe you a massive apology. I wish I had a decent reason to not have reviewed this sooner; the truth is, it's just lots and lots of little things that took up my time and things like challenge reviews get pushed aside.

Anyway. The mystery and suspense in this prologue work extremely well - I'm unsettled by the evil... things even though I'm not entirely sure what they are. (I'm tentatively guessing vampires.) It's actually led me to try and deduce things from the words you use, even though I could just read the next chapter. xD

You've also got some lovely turns of phrase. The repetition of 'dark, desolate' and that final image of 'watch[ing] the sky light up as the world burns' were fantastic. :)

Author's Response: Hey!

It's okay! I'm horribly slow when it comes to reviews and responses (obviously... *hides*).

Ooh, unsettled? I'm glad! :P The things... I will say that vampires are involved. BUT not the only ones... ;)

Thank you so much. And for reviewing!

Sam.


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