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Review:caoty says:
Hello~

Ahem. Right. So. This is amazing, and I'm sure you know that, but I'm going to tell you it anyway - the way you've blended the humour and drama reminds me a lot of Shaun of the Dead, which is one of my favourite films.

Hermione's characterisation is interesting. It's very easy to see her as someone who would try to do everything and fix everything the way she does here, and who focuses almost entirely on what she feels needs to be done, which puts a distance between her and the others... it's very realistic and very Hermione.

There's not a lot that I can think of to say here - I'm a bit crap at this reviewing thing, tbh - but that this bit:

"H-Harry?" She gasped, looking at his face, which was pockmarked and unsightly.

"Rarg," was his reply.

was perfectly set up. It's funny, but at the same time it's devastating. I don't know how you do it.

And now I'll shut up, but expect to see me around in the future. I'm kind of like that.

Author's Response: Hello! I am so excited to see you here reviewing my story!!

I'm so glad you like the humor and the drama, that is something that I was trying to do, because this story can never take itself too seriously.

I'm also glad that you think that Hermione is well characterized. I always worry since I feel like Hermione would know better but I think that there is this whole other emotional component that would come with losing her best friends that we might not see in the books.

I'm so glad that you are here and I look forward to more of your reviews!! You're a great reviewer, don't put yourself down!! :)


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