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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for review tag!

Wow. This was surely a very different and interesting one-shot. I absolutely loved the entire idea of Snape appearing as a child, and the way Lily was so compassionate throughout.

Your descriptions were beautiful, and I was really engrossed while reading. Your writing style was just amazing and the entire piece flowed smoothly.

I liked the queer feel that surrounded the story from the beginning itself. The part about the mirror somehow indicated to me that the entire story is in an unearthly setting. I also liked how I could guess the child to be Snape from when he was introduced even though you didn't mention it until later.

I think over all this was a very well-written piece. The plot idea is original, your characterisation is spot on, your choice of words is perfect, your descriptions are brilliant, and the emotions expressed are superb.

I am so glad I got a chance to read this story. I have been wanting to read something of yours for a while and its great that I managed to jump at the chance when I got it in the review tag thread =)

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks, AD! I'm so happy you liked the story. I wrote this piece a while ago and know there are still some rough spots despite a few recent edits, but I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

I definitely wanted the mirror to give off a sort of otherworldly feel. I didn't want to come out and say what exactly was going, but I did want the reader to suspect early on that something wasn't quite as it seemed.

Wow, thank you for the lovely compliments. Even after all these years of writing, I still have to fight the urge to delete everything I post. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving such a nice review!


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