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Review:nott theodore says:
Thank you for the quick update, it made me really happy!

I don't want this to happen! Dominique should be marrying Ignotus and not Callum! It's all going wrong!

Even though I don't want Dominique to marry Callum, I really enjoyed this chapter. The way you write is so compelling, and I think your characters are absolutely brilliant. Somehow you manage to keep the speech consistent with the time, and the settings are quite simple but very effective. It's such a pleasure reading this story!

The beginning of this chapter was so sad, because I really want Dom and Ignotus (Dignotus? Ignomique?) to be together because they obviously love each other, and Ignotus was really hurt that she would agree to marry someone else, but at the same time wanting her to be happy. Now they're both engaged to someone else and it's going to make everything more difficult. Ignotus should have told Dominique about Brigid before she was driven to making this sort of decision, because then at least she would know the reasons behind his actions. I hope he tells her soon, because she actually deserves to know.

As far as Callum is concerned, I don't entirely trust him. I know that at the time people got engaged and married when they hardly knew each other, but I don't think Dominique knows Callum well enough to truly make a decision about whether she can be happy as his wife. Although he seems a reformed character, enchanted as he is at the moment with Dominique, I'm not entirely sure that it will last. At the same time, he is a good match for Dominique because he doesn't follow all the conventions of the time, and is much more like the sort of person she would encounter in 2022. But if the spell breaks, he could easily return to his former character and then Dominique would be doubly unhappy. Maybe I'm just reading far too much into this though, because I really want Dominique to be with Ignotus and don't trust Callum because of it! (I've decided I like Ignomique better than Dignotus as a couple name now).

As usual, I really loved this chapter and since you mentioned that there would be a scene from 2022 in the next chapter, I'm intrigued to see what will happen there. I think I'd like to see some more of Ignotus' mother soon so that we can see what she thinks of Dominique and Callum, and to see how soon Ignotus is meant to be married.

I'll look forward to the next chapter and I hope you update soon again!

nott theodore :)

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