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Review:MarauderLover7 says:
Brilliant chapter! :D
Haha, Fred should keep his nickname; Ginger Spice is classic! I'm curious to see whether Sirius will stay as Padfoot, though; will his Animagus form change, or will he go by a different name? 'Blackie' could be funny... :P I don't see James being a stag Animagus. I think he's too different to the original James to have the same form, but I could be wrong. Are you planning to make then Animagi? I can definitely see Fred as a bird or a squirrel (something small and energetic! :P). Sirius would be able to help them learn if they wanted to, wouldn't he? Or would he have another mature moment and decide they're too young?
I'm also really interested about your take on the Map's creation and was sort of hoping James might be able to get more information out of Sirius about it. Will they make another one? Or will James 'miraculously' find it?
Sirius' response to Kreacher being alive is interesting; I'm not quite sure where you're going with it, but I'm curious. :)
I'm also interested to see when James will slip up and tell Sirius that he knows; it was a close shave with the Map and Sirius was clever enough to work out the Polyjuice Potion and the whole Teddy-Vic thing... It's only a matter of time, surely?
Oh no! James is James again! McGonagall will be torn between being furious and impressed, I think and same with Neville. Maybe Sirius could pretend it was just a prank? :P Either way, I sense a letter or visit from Harry and Ginny in the near future. I wonder what Lily and Al will think... :P
Anyway, brilliant work and I'll read the next chapter when I've got the time! :D
Keep writing!
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Ginger Spice will definitely make a come back. xD Even if Fred doesn't like it.

I'm not too sure currently if I will or won't make them Animagi, but I have toyed around with the idea. I'm just not completely dead set on one or the other. Haha

You'll find out more about Sirius though in later chapters and about his Animagus form. As for whether he would help them, I could see him going either way. However, that would only work if he admitted to being an Animagus or even Sirius Black.

I have plans for both the current Map and even a new one. Only problem with James "finding it" would be Sirius' name. But I can assure you the Map makes it's appearance in later chapters. Sirius doesn't give too much away, but I have thought about the creation of the Map and will probably have Sirius explain more later on down the road.

Haha, I can't wait to bring Kreacher in as well and see what happens.

James has had a few close calls. I can't really say Sirius has because James already knows his big secret. But Sirius only worked out Davison was James after he saw the feather. He didn't work out the Polyjuice Potion on his own entirely. But Sirius is cleaver, you're right and James isn't the best at hiding things from him.

I promise Teddy and Victoire will be together. You'll just have to wait a little longer there. :)

Haha, you'll just have to see what happens in the next chapter soon. :)

Thank you for the review!
Taz


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