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Review:Flavia says:
She's so close! Work it out Lily you dolt!

I am very happy that she decided not to get Bradley to follow Matt around, that would be a death wish on the relationship if ever there was one!

Beautifully written - as always :) There were a couple of minor things like quotation marks where they shouldn't have been, but it was just the tiny little things we all seem to miss during the final edit (I always have a tiny mistake somewhere - even if I edit five times!)

Love this story, love this ship (now that I'm allowed to love ships again :P), love the writing.

Author's Response: She is! She'll get there soon. Letting Bradley snoop around Matt's life would've been the end of it. It would've wrecked her relationship with Albus, too.

I'll have to give it another read for editing. No matter how many times I edit it there's always something! I'm so glad you like the story! And, haha, yes, you can like ships again! :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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