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Review:greenphantomme says:
WOW! I can't believe I'm stumbling upon this story now - It's just brilliant - I almost have no words.

Usually with stories, especially HP fanfic stories they get a little predictable. But this, man I am completely stumped. I can't really figure out the motives of Thane - he can't be psychotic because then he would have killed them all without regard, and he obviously knows what he's doing. . . but what IS he doing!

Why did he (they) spell Hogwarts? Why is he still hiding out and keeping watch? Why why why why why! Haha I should probably read through it again to see if you left any clues, I just powered through this last night.
I just can't even think of anything, unless it was revenge or doing a mad psychological experiment.

But then that raises the question that if the six weren't in the forest on detention that night when the ritual was done - they would have all been sick and all of Hogwarts would have been incapacitated.

Anyway enough with my rambling.

This is excellent writing. It's intelligent, witty, and enjoyable to read. I absolutely love the characterisations as well.

Selena is really growing on me. I love her personality and how she is caring but then doesn't take shit from anyone. She's very honest!

And yeah, love everyone else as well. You've provided depth to the characters and made everything realistic and relatable.

I feel like Scorpius has one of the most important jobs, even though he doesn't feel like it.

This story is wonderful, really. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: This story IS going to be finished. Promise. Thank you very much for your kind words, and for your wondering! It always pleases me when readers chew on the plot. Thane's motivations will become less opaque as time goes by, though I doubt he's ever to be fully understood. The man has his reasons and his logic is sometimes known only to himself.

Thanks for reviewing!

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