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Review:AlexFan says:
She and Teddy really seem to understand each other and how they work. I feel so bad for Teddy, I just want to give him a hug and give him some chocolate but I also feel bad for Dom and I wanna give her a hug and some chocolate.

You know, I think being a reporter for the Daily Prophet would probably be the easiest job for a werewolf because I'm sure that you'd be able to take off one or two days a month to change at the full moon.

There were some very minor grammar errors (like "savage" instead of "salvage").

I'm not sure how I feel about Dom's boss though, at first I really liked her (and I still do, kind of) but then as the chapter went on I started liking her less because while she was worried about Dom, she also wanted to use Dom to her advantage.

Overall, I think you've got a very interesting and great story here and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Sorry for the delay in responding.

Yes, Dom and Teddy are 'soul-mates' =) Aw, I was feeling the same when I was writing about the two as well. Your hugs and chocolate have been duly given to my characters ;)

Haha, I didn't quite think of that aspect, but yes you're probably right, it'd be very easy for her to take a day or two off.

Oh thanks for pointing out that grammar error, I'll edit it out, and I'll also read through again to spot any more.

Dom's boss is not exactly a nice person. She puts on a sweet facade but well inside she's vile. I don't like her either, haha.

I am pleased you're finding my story interesting. The next chapter is the queue!


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