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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ohhh what a steamy chapter!

I think you had Rose reach a lot of really important parts in this. The first section was very contemplative, and she had her guard down enough to admit, if even just to herself, that she felt lonely without Scorpius in the house. For someone who's trotted off to study wandlore, handles herself and her adult life without the help of anyone else, and is just really an independent person, that's a big deal! I thought that moving into the next section was very well done.

It was sad to see Scorpius so upset, and with what he saw, who could blame him. You chose a really great way to mix his anger and disgust with just at touch of innocence left. The way that they sort of fell into this mixture of neither being on comfortable ground, and both being a little too open with one another was awesome.

I think that adding in a bit of the insecurities Scorpius is feeling was awesome as well. It was scary there for a moment that they'd blow up and I'd have gotten all excited for nothing, but then they smoothed it all out. Good characters. You can have cookies.

Moving from the sort of darkness our little hero witnessed to the emotional kind of night they've turned to was really great, and now I'm looking forward to learning a little more about both of them through one another.

Awesome chapter ♥

Author's Response: Nobody's getting any cookies until the bad guy is caught! Grandma Weasley's rules!

I do believe that the strongest people are those who are the most conflicted. Nobody just goes off and leaves their family like that. I don't even like it when Mom's on vacation and I have the house all to myself. Rose has some issues that she finally admitted and she was nice and behaved while I sorted them out.

This was one of the first scenes I had in mind with them as a couple when I started this and for me it was a milestone of sorts. You know the feeling when you finally get the idea out of your head and there's so much room for other story ideas!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! You are amazing!

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