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Review:MissMdsty says:
I am shipping Autumn/Louis. Just so you know. I'll even write their names across my forehead and send it to you if it makes them get a move on already! So I guess that answers your question on what scenes I want in future chapters!

I loved how Summer saw right through them and she already knows what we know, that Autumn likes him!

Again, lovely scenes with the girls. Hitting Dom for a comment like that is something I would do. And the baby came! I loved the letters they got from home, the relatives are hilarious and I can see where they get their brand of humor from. I could fill up this whole box with favorite quotes! "Trelawney Junior"? Priceless!

And the party is going to be so much fun! Unless, accident prone as they are, they get into some kind of trouble. I'd almost bet you a 12 galleon handbag that's going to happen!

Again, a brilliant chapter! I love how you present these characters. You have a way of writing OCs that I've never seen. They just come to life and before you know it, you love them and want them to be happy! Brilliant!

Again, I spotted two things:

"She's seen some of your four already," - some of you four? As in some pictures of you four? Or some of your pictures already.

"Two weeks had taken place since the party," - two weeks had passed since the party had taken place.

I'm done now! Update soon and keep on doing this amazing job!

Ral

Author's Response: I swear there is Loutumn fluff coming soon, so no worries there!

Summer knows Autumn better than Autumn knows herself sometimes, and vice versa. I think like writing those two almost more than than anything else, including Louis and Autumn...

I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKE FAMILY. THAT IS ALL.

I will not say about the party, but as soon as RF gets validated I am putting chapter six in the queue! Roxanne is on the lookout for trouble though, so she should keep the girls out of it... hopefully.

Yes, 'some of you four'. I'll edit those little typos immediately.

THANK YOUUU RAL &hearts


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