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Review:MissMdsty says:
I am having doubts about your sanity. And I mean it with all the love. Nobody can dig so well into Bellatrix's head and come out unharmed. This was breathtakingly amazing. You never cease to amaze me!

The images you paint here of Bella are so powerful. I like the idea that she takes back the magic, that when she disposes of those who are in her way, she not only gets her way but also gets their power. That's such an interesting concept.

I also liked the idea that she is helping the Dark Lord (why do we keep calling him that? Alas, fear of a name...) to her own gain, eventually. To be left alone with him in a world where only they are important. That's something I've always found interesting about Bellatrix, the way in which she got in this position. What made her jump ship and become heartless?

I know you write romance like nobody's business but I love how you can also write this darker, deranged side of the human mind! This was a lovely prologue and the story is going straight to my favorites! I can't wait to see what you come up with! ♥

Author's Response: Ral! Sorry for the late response :(. I got so busy finishing chapter 25. That one was being a pain, I tell ya.

Doubt about my sanity?! Oh gosh darling, you're going to be ready to commit me to the nut house by the end of this :P.

The habit of calling him the Dark Lord sort of catches you after reading something that's told in support of him, doesn't it? I always find myself doing that too after writing section of the baddies in BTF.

I'm so happy you liked this prologue ♥ I always get in these moods where I just want to write something. something not as normal and put together as BTF. I just needed an outlet to all the amazing Marauders and their incredible sweetness, and I've been wanting to start this Bella project for a while now! Promise you won't have me committed by the end? :P

Thank you so much for stopping by ♥

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