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Review:patronus_charm says:
I missed out on the 500th review, I wanted to get that! Congrats on reaching 500 reviews though, thatís so impressive!

Belleís afraid of cats? Somehow that seems to make perfect sense, and I can imagine why she would be. I really liked the light heartedness, I think it was necessary after all that drama with Bellatrix, and we needed to see something happier! Why did it have to have so much emphasis on food though? Itís making me hungry!

I loved the banter between the girls. And Iím glad the thing about James came up, as I wanted to find out too. Silly Mrs Potter though, coming in at the crucial moment where we could have found out the extent of Lilyís feelings for James, Iím hoping that we get to find out later on though. Mrs Potter was really sweet, and it always makes my heart warm when she mentions Sirius as one of hers as it shows how much he means to her.

I liked learning more about the othersí parents it helped me identify them more. Augusta was perfect! The way she was trying to get Alice to eat more just seems like something she would do, and I did feel a little sorry for her being accosted like that. At least Mr Potter stepped in and saved her. It was interesting that you made Remusí and Peterís parents know one another, Iíve never seen that done before but I rather liked it.

Aw Jamesí present was so sweet and you could tell how much thought he had put into it with getting the others to help him out with it, and the how long he had been working on it. No wonder he wanted to give it to her away from the others, even though Sirius helped with it, he probably wouldnít turn down the chance to tease James for being so romantic. Even though I havenít had a nightmare in ages, I wouldnít mind having one as it just seems like a really cool and unique thing to have.

Lilyís painting skills remerged then! I almost forgot about them, but it seems like the perfect present to give to James. I always thought that patronuses were really beautiful, especially Jamesí due to it being a stag so I want this present too. Magical presents are so much cooler than muggle ones :P they seem to know each other really well, as you can tell how much thought they put into their presents.

I really enjoyed this lighter chapter, and Iím all caught up now, itís so exciting! Except I have to wait for updates now :(

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much ♥ just the fact that you're still reviewing means way more to me than reaching a certain number. I'd trade ten of my random reviews on this story for one of the amazing ones you leave me ♥

Hahahah oops, I didn't mean to make it seem like she was afraid of cats :P! It was supposed to just be like, they're walking down the stairs in the dark and Butterscotch touching her foot just scared her. I better look at that section again!

Kiana! You know me better than that! You really think I'm going to give you all of Lily's feelings this easily?! Mwahaha! Heheheh. I love when she says those things about Sirius too. Sometimes I feel like I created the Potters around Sirius and James. Like, I wanted the sort of people that would do the kinds of things they've done, and raise a child that's somewhat spoiled but still a great man. And then they popped up! I think knowing you like them is one of my very favorite things ♥

Eeek I'm so happy you liked James's present! I really struggled figuring out what they'd give each other as gifts and that was one of the things I didn't have planned out until we actually got there. Now I'm happy that I waited for the right idea to sort of pop up because I am really happy with how the blanket turned out.

Yes her painting skills are back! I kept wanting to slip the fact that she paints back in, so I was happy to find a suitable time to do so!

You're all caught up! Well, when you left this review you were. I'm going to be honest Kiana, when you started reviewing I thought you'd maybe get ten in or so then get busy and stop. The fact that you've enjoyed this story enough to follow me this far means so much to me. I wish I could just come through the computer and hug you. Guess what, I've officially thought of a title for book two!!! I'm so excited to see what you think of it when that time comes!!!

Thank you so much for being such an amazing reader and just making me sit here all smiley like a crazy person on numerous occasions ♥


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