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Review:harrietm says:
Hello again!! I am in some serious need of conflict resolutoon haha Although I can see how you're setting things excited for the next chapter! Literally fistpumped for Leo, such a kickass moment, and so necessary. And Scorpius, freaking adorable. I can't say I did expect James to get so sad at losing Rachelle, but it does make sense, I mean, he was practically using her as a shield from the pain. But I really hope he gets happy soon :(
Just a few typos in some of the dialogue that I picked up:
- corned instead of cornered
- something big must've happen
- rachelle says fallen apart but james says falling apart
That was all I noticed though so good job again :)

Author's Response: I should really re-read through these things before I put them up, luckily I have you to catch my mistakes :P

Oh...the next chapter won't resolve anything :/, but it will happen :D

I know, right?! He's such a bad A!

I completely agree, it was unexpected, but realistic :) those were my intentions, of course.

Sad James is really awful to write, so you can expect him to be happy soon :)

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