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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hi. . . . . .Siriusly89 here with your insanely late review. I am so sorry its taken so long! Please donít throw stuff at me!

Anyway, Iím here now, ready to review!

Wow. . . .the first person weíre introduced to is a character and a half, arenít they? Three paragraphs in and I already have suspicions theyíve murdered their mother. What on earth are they doing on Platform 9 ĺ Ďs if theyíre a murderer? Please do not tell me they are letting them attend Hogwarts (assuming the person is of Hogwarts age of course)

Okay, now Iím really confused. James seems to be some sort of Auror, in charge of Rosenelle, but then what on earth are they doing getting on the Hogwarts Express?

And now weíre beginning to see what sort of background Rosenelle grew up in. She was an unmarried pureblood who just so happened to get pregnant, so what do her parents do? Kick her out. Perfectly logical plan of action. Not.

Oh God! This is a different person altogether! But I still feel for her, I really do.

Anna seems like a bit of a spoilt princess, but I canít help feeling for her, the poor girl. Life really isnít going her way, is it? I like that Louis is there for her though.

And then weíre on to the third girl. Sheís an Arithmancer? Oh! You donít see too many of those around the place! I like her already, she seems different, less crazy than Rosenelle, and less spoilt than Roseanna.

That evil hoodie idiot, does he have nothing better to do? I canít wait to find out who her saviour is though!

And we donít find out. Can I just say that this is the most original first chapter Iíve read in a long time, I liked it so much Iím going to favourite! Seriously, please update soon!

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