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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello there!

I took on the challenge of reviewing just chapter 5 as you requested! What for other readers may have been old news, for me it came as a shock. The fact that the book keeping was lacking, that Oliver was married to Penelope and wouldn't sign the papers. You've got yourself quite a story here!

I loved the first part, the scene in which Oliver looks over the finances of the team. Something about his attitude made me grin! He's my kind of guy, won't take any nonsense and wants to fix things.

I loved Percy! He was so in character and his ramblings just made me giggle! Oh and Dobby on the statue! *tear* That broke my heart!

This story is very interesting and I liked the ending, when on top of everything else, one of his players got suspended! I loved your writing style, everything seems to fall into place so naturally that it's a joy to read! Keep up the good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter! I wasn't sure if you'd want to or not, as starting a few chapters into something can be awkward, so I appreciate this review a lot.

We only found out Oliver was married to Penelope this chapter, so you're not too far behind. And yes, Oliver is going to be as difficult as he can be to poor old Penny, but isn't that what makes it entertaining!

Oliver is definitely a no-nonsense kind of guy, but he's not one to throw in the towel, and he's in this for the long run, or at least until he gets Puddlemere back on its feet.

Percy was such fun to write. I may have to bring him back at a later stage. I just love that oddball so much. . . . and Dobby made a cameo! If he can't be alive darn it, he's going to be immortalized in statue form!

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

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