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Review:HallowsAndHorcruxes says:
First of all yay for the wotcha! It's just makes everything more Tonks so good on you for getting one in there!

I think her hate for Dawlish is very much deserved as Dawlish seems to be one of those guys that everybody really hates at least a little bit anyway. So with Tonks being Tonks I can defiantly see why she wouldn't like him.

The hints bewtween Tonk and Remus where lovely. Nice and light little hints to what may happen in the future to keep the reader interested. I especially liked the smiling one with Remus as you described it beautifully.

The pub scene flowed very nicely and seemed to fit in very well with the story so far as it's a good communal place to have different characters meet. So it made the second part of the chapter very enjoyable to read.

Bill. well I loved how you portrayed him as even though there isn't too much said about in in the book I still feel like it fit with his character. I also loved how he was offended that Remus claim to Harry bested his own as it just seems to make him a Weasley in that way as Ron is like that too.

Keep up the good work and feel free to re-request!

~Hallows!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the wotcha I agree that it does make everything more Tonksish, and I can't believe I forgot to include it in the last chapter!

I'm glad that you liked her hate for Dawlish, they just seem to be the type of people who would just clash straight away!

I'm glad that you liked the hints about Remus/Tonks, I wasn't sure if the smile was too obvious so I'm glad that you found it fit :D I try to include them every chapter, as I know the reader loves them!

I'm glad the pub scene worked, as I didn't know how to bring Remus into the story, and I thought it would be a bit weird if it was just the two of them, hence Bill was brought in.

I wasn't too sure about Bill, as like you said he doesn't feature much so I was just guessing really, but I'm glad that you liked him, and the way he got offended :P

Thanks for the great review, and I will re-request when the next chapter's up:D

-Kiana :D


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