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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

Now, I'm not really into angst (like, at all), but I'm willing to give new things a shot! And I'm glad that I did!

I think this a really strong start to what seems to be quite the story! It looks like this will be one of those stories which will be mostly character driven, so I'm looking forward to some really intense character development (which I love)!

I must say, that already, Al is my favourite. He seems like such a good friend, and I'm looking forward to how you develop his relationship with Charlotte!

Nice work!

PS: What happens when you reach chapter 24? Which wonderful word will you choose for the letter X?

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm glad you gave it a shot :) I am focusing a lot on each character and showing how they develop over the year (in good ways and bad.)

I know what you mean about Al. I love writing him so much that I have to really remind myself to write my other characters in! If you read on you'll see what I mean. (hint hint)

Thanks for the lovely review!
-Avis12

PS: I know right??!! I've been throwing around some ideas (all of which are no good.)
X is for Xylaphone: Charlotte picks up a new instrumental talent. Laughable.
X is for Xenophilius: for some reason Charlotte meets Luna's dad. Why would she though?
X is for Xiphoid Process: I think I would ruin the whole story if I titled a chapter after the cartilage at the bottom of the sternum (I'm studying anatomy.)

Luckily I have a little bit of time to think about it :)


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