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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
HOLY COW, WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!?!

So yeah, the prologue was really vague and mysterious, but now, it all falls into place!! I love it!! Kudos to you, for being suspenseful and awesome!! Near the end, I was like, "Who is this killer going to be? He's going to be revealed!" And yeah, he was! WOWZA!!

Craziness aside, this chapter was really marvelous. I enjoyed the vignette of Teddy and Victoire in the kitchen--they're sweet! :)

I also really liked the little sketch in italics at the very beginning, even though I wasn't sure who it was talking about until I got to the non-italicized part. It really gave me an idea of just how much Teddy cares about his family. In addition to that: All of the stories from the birthday party were tied in really well at the end, as all the faces came up to haunt Teddy. I hate Barrett because he's a big jerk, and I still want to know why Harry retired!

Was he just too old, or did they dismiss him? I MUST know!! :p

Continue being awesome, and I'll review you later, I'm sure! :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Oh my god, this review... it literally made my day! I was exhausted from working at a daycare center all day, and now I'm not even tired, I'm just happy! Thank you :D

I'm so glad that you liked this! I love writing about Teddy and Victoire, because I think they're an awesome couple. I'm glad that you liked reading it too.

The bit in italics will be cleared up in the future, who it's about and so on :)

I hate Barrett too! He really is a jerk.

Actually, Harry just retired. I know it's not clear in the story, but he wasn't fired or anything like that.

thank you SO MUCH for this review, for being so helpful and for giving such wonderful compliments, that really encourage me to keep writing. You're the best!! :)


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