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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
First of all, how have I not noticed that this story has had a new chapter for weeks now! Gah that just makes me so sad because I remember loving this story so much! Ok, well I'm here now and now I will go read the chapter!

Man I can't even get far into the story without already falling back in love with it! Your wording and imagery that you paint for your readers is just beautiful! I was sucked right in to your chapter and felt like I had never left it! And oh how this new chapter did not disappoint! I just loved it all to bits! I did notice one mistake and it was here "for surely no polite wizard could know such depth of feeling, particularly not a Malfois" I'm not sure if the i in malfoy's is meant or not but I'm assuming you meant to have a y there.

I'm so excited to have seen a new update for this story and hopefully more will be coming again soon because I have missed this very much! This story has been in my favorites for a reason so I will continue to keep my eye on it and hope for some more updates!

I was kind of wondering where Rose was at since she had really wanted to be there in the first place, but I will admit to suspecting that maybe she had come as Roxanne I didn't even think about Louis! It was great though when it was revealed that it was her and that Malfoy didn't get upset about it! I loved that he even kept with the civility of it all and shook her hand in the end. I can't wait to see what you will come up with next for this story! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for coming to read and review this story! I'd only just realized how long it had taken me to update this story! Somehow I'd lost track of time - I can't even believe that it's been a year-and-a-half since I began writing it. Anyway, I'm really glad that you've been enjoying it, and I promise to keep better track of updates in the future. :)

Eee, you liked the chapter! It's fantastic to hear that! For that line you pointed out, I think I wanted to allude to the French translation of Malfoy as "bad faith" - that the family can't show depth of feeling because of their lack of faith, but now that I look at it, the sentence didn't turn out the way I wanted it to. It's too confusing. >< Oh well, thank you for pointing it out - it's a case of the words sounding better in my head than on paper.

It was tricky to make the scene work because of Rose - how could I trick the reader into believing that she was not there. She could have been watching from the trees (and Roxanne had purposely passed her by), though I hadn't thought of her being Roxanne. I made her Louis instead because it would mean the significant change of costume - Rose isn't afraid of becoming someone else, least of all a man, and that impresses Malfoy just as much as her magical abilities.

Thank you again! :D


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