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Review:patronus_charm says:
Team Blue for the win!

I have decided that Molly and I are kindred spirits. First of all, we love libraries, love the same authors and have the habit of delaying revision for something more preferable. Iím already liking this girl! And sheís intriguing, the way sheís ready to get rid of her good reputation, itís so unlike Percy. Iím sure he wonít be too happy when he hears about this!

And you made Lucy her twin, Iíve never seen that done before, but I liked it. Whatís this mystery potion, and the people crying? Iím guessing itís some kind of illness she has, youíve already got me intrigued though, and Iím hoping itís not too bad as I donít want my kindred spirit to die.

I liked how you made her friends with Vic, as I tend to see people make her and Lucy the nerdy girls, compared to the cool Weasleys, so I was glad to see it wasnít like that here, as I hate that stereotype.

I was right about her having illness, but I didnít realise it was so serious that she might die. Iím really curious to find out what it is, as I generally assume that magical people can cure most illnesses, and itís always interesting to see when magic and medicine are combined.

And the mystery narrator, Iím hoping heís going to be like Mr Bingley and come and sweep Lucy off his feet. We can forget about Mr Darcy telling him to leave her alone, because this guy does seem pretty keen on her.

Sorry if this review isnít very coherent, Iím currently very hungry and that addles with my brain a bit. I really enjoyed this prologue though, and felt it was a great start to the story!

-Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

Haha, I'm so glad you like Molly! I think they're not unusual characteristics, at least certainly not for people on the forums, so I wanted to portray a realistic person, so I'm glad you like her! Yeah, Percy won't necessarily be too happy :P

Yeah, I've seen that a lot too, so I liked the chance to show both Vic and Molly, I guess, in nicer lights, in a way - so that they do actually get on.

Ooh, yeah, it is a kinda weird illness, and it is a dangerous sort of thing - perhaps more dangerous than it seems, I think, but I like the idea of it being underestimated :)

Mystery narrator... ooh, maybe, maybe not :P There will be some romance, so we'll have to see ;)

Haha, no worries about it - it was perfectly coherent! :) Thank you very much for the great review! :)

Aph xx

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