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Review:Jchrissy says:
I said this before but I’m just going to go ahead and reiterate it. I LOVE that you used both the lyric and the title. It just sets the mood for the story so perfectly. As well as this chapter image. You’re just getting me all geared up for quite the ride, and I want to hug you for it. And now I”m going to continue on actually reviewing the story!

Well I didn’t get far. I’m terrible at running reviews, yet here I am doing on. The first paragraph, I just want to eat it. It’s so asdsjf. That. That’s what it is. The description and the way you’ve made your words and style fit in with time is just prefect. I can’t even understand how your brain does what it does most of the time. I can’t even write a coherent review to this piece, yet you managed to create it all!

I’m attempting to go on...

I made myself continue. I wanted to stop again right after you did the italicized bit of what William’s father told him about The Raven, but I made myself keep reading. Go Jami! Not very far though, because now I’m at the part where he’s remembering his sister being brought into the world. And I’m backtracking to talk about the part anyway sooo...

But it’s just so perfect! You don’t give us enough to know what to think of him, yet we want to like him. Or I do. Ravenclaw, that is. The description of him being able to strip the meat from your very bones is just insane. It’s that good. I forgot how much I loved this story since I read it last, and I’m even more anxious for you to continue. William feels almost naive up until this point. Like a young boy put into an adult world that he’ll morph himself into eventually, but isn’t there just yet.

Ohh I just kind of love them. I really love anything revolving around knights and squires, and you just fit it all in there so it feels so right. Have you ever read Tamora Pierce? You’d like her stuff. Most of it is set around that. The idea of Rowena teaching wandlore, arithmancy, and herbcraft (good adjustment, there) is perfect and tells a lot about her and ties into canon. We know what Ravenclaw is known for, and this show exactly why their traits are what they are without shoving it down our throat. Just a small mention of something she does that builds her character up an incredible amount.

And her lecture to William about his actions to the bully, I just can’t say enough about how perfect you’ve made her!

Hahaha I love the mention of Ravenclaw and the midwife having the disagreement. Okay, I really do like Reyneld (Reynold?) Reynald! There we go. His comment about being there when the babe was created was just so perfect. You make this really amusing, which I think a lot of people would struggle with because of the style it needs to be written in to fit the time. HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING?

Oh Sarah!!! Goddd I can’t even... this just started out so beautiful. I need more right away. The image of the little baby curling her fingers around his hand and gahh it’s just so sweet. This is a perfect start. You have so much talent. I can’t even tell you how happy it makes me at how much you’ve been writing lately. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR BRAIN.

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