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Review:Ardeith says:
I was here yesterday, but I put off reading your story due to the April Fool's joke. Good decision because this lovely chapter deserves to be read as you wrote it. :-)

I love your James and Lily, they're so real and so sweet. This so beautifully complements canon, it feels "real". On the one hand, I love seeing baby Harry and how much his parents loved him, but on the other hand, YOU KNOW... :-(

James' emotions are so right, they way he resents being confined and all that he's missing, even though he is happy with his wife and son.

And I love all the little details...like Lily's moment of confusion/worry when James first says he can't stop thinking of Beth.

Can't wait to see James and Sirius going after the memories. I think at least a little bit of James' motivation is to have an adventure...

Happy Easter to you, too!

Author's Response: I read through a few of my chapters during April Fool's, and my goodness -- I'm quite glad you waited. :P Those changes were funny, but it did alter the content of the story quite a bit!

I'm so glad you enjoy my James/Lily, especially because I have so much fun writing them. I think apart from Beth and Snape (for obvious reasons), James might be my favorite character to write in this trilogy. Or Sirius. But there's something about James that is very real, I suppose, and it makes it doubly awesome that you see him as real, too.

Ahaha, I had to go back and read that part about Lily's confusion again after you pointed it out. Poor Lily! ♥

James and Sirius will get their adventure, I can tell you that. That happens in... chapter 11, I think? So only about a month of waiting for you!

Thank you so much for such lovely support, Ardeith. You're one of my absolute best reviewers; I cannot even begin to tell you how much I appreciate your comments.


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