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Review:adluvshp says:
Hello! Here for review swap (from my status earlier on).

Wow this seems like an amazing story! I loved the way you have portrayed Quirrel. He seems so brave and confident as opposed to how he was shown in the books (it is only to be expected though as Voldemort took over him).

I like how you have maintained such a mysterious air around the story, and narrated the events in this dark fairy-tale-ish manner. I enjoyed it a lot. I also loved your descriptions and imagery, as they really painted the scenes in front of my eyes. Your use of the vocabulary words is amazing, I would never have been able to do them justice as you did. You are truly a gifted writer =)

I liked the entire scenario of how Quirrel is a traveller who comes to Albania and wants to defeat this dark force to expand his power, and the interaction he had with the woman. It all established the setting for the story quite well and it shows how excitingly the plot is going to unfold in the further chapters.

I also like the idea of "master of his own destiny", and the irony of how that would change when Voldemort would become his master. That is quite clever.

All in all, this seems like a brilliant story. Your grammar and sentence phrasing is impeccable, and your descriptions and imagery is amazing. The entire narrative flowed smoothly, and over all this seems like a great first chapter to what I am sure is a superb story.

Keep writing! Great going!
10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Ah!! Thank you so much for all of your kind words!! :D

A gifted writer? Me? You're too kind! :)

This was actually meant to be a one-shot for a challenge, but after reading your review, maybe I SHOULD continue it! I think it would be interesting to see what happens to Quirrel after he meets Voldemort, but as of right now, even I don't know! :)

Thank you so much for your amazing review!

~UnluckyStar57


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