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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hey there, here to review the first chapter for my challenge! :)
This is an interesting first chapter! I loved the flasback, they didn't feel forced into the piece and it was a nice way to see what happened between Rose and Scorpios, how they came together anyway!

This is a great start, I love the idea that's she having doubts and the wedding is in like an hour! I also love the characterisation of Rose, I haven't read many stories were she's a quiet ravenclaw who doesn't really like Quidditch and it's a nice change!

Your prompt was Rose/Scorpious and you've did a perfect job with it. It's sweet, how they were together in school because they both felt like they didn't belong, it's nice!

Great story, can't wait to see what happens next and you've did a great job with the prompt! :)

Author's Response: Hey Shaza!

I'm so glad that you loved the flashback, and that it fitted in, I think that was the thing I was more worried about!

Yeah I hadn't read many stories about Rose when she was like that either, so I thought it would be fun to mix it up a bit ;D

I'm glad that you thought the prompt worked well, and I can't wait to see what you think of the next few chapters!

Thanks for the review,

-Kiana :D

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