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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Hey there, here to review your piece for my challenge! :)
This is a great idea, I love how she goes to see the conducter and then she gets kidnapped that way, it's an interesting idea because of course, we don't actually see how Luna got took.

I love your characterisation of Luna, it's perfect! From the start when she's thinking about her friends right to the end when she tries to get rid of the Wrackkspurt, you've written her perfectly! I also love how she is so defiant and isn't going to show them that they are getting to her.

Your prompt was Luna Lovegoos and you've did a perfect job with it. It's an interesting part of Luna's life at Hogwarts and you've written it beautifully!

It's a lovely one shot and you've did a great job with the prompt! :)

Author's Response: Hello! :D

Yeah, I sat down and was about to start typing before I realised I didn't know much about Luna's capturing. :p

I'm so glad my characterisation was perfect! A few reviewers have said that, because she was SO difficult to write! Because she's a bit of an oddball - let's face it - but she's also extremely brave!

Wow, thank you for all your compliments! Thanks for posting the challenge, I might never have written Luna otherwise! :D

Thanks for the review! :)

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