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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Your chapter changed because of the site's April Fool's joke, everyone's did, they're back to normal now :)
I like your story a lot, you've written Draco and Hermione very well, especially the bits about how the war has affected them both. I love the idea of Ginny and Blaise teaming up to get them together too.
My only small bit of advice would be to get yourself a beta, someone to proof read your chapters before submitting. There are a few spelling mistakes (knew instead of new, daily profit should be daily prophet etc) and some grammatical errors too (mostly punctuation in your speech but also things like 'should/would/could of...' should actually be 'should/would/could have...' Etc)
It's nothing major but sometimes can put readers off if the spelling and grammar isn't right. I'm glad I persevered though because your story is very good. I'd be more than happy to beta for you if you like, just let me know and I can give you my email address :)

Author's Response: Thanks, if you contact me with your email somehow, i have a page on 'meet the author' thing, so if you want to do it on there, i could send you the 12th chapter when it is done x

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