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Review:carosquiggle3003 says:
*McDonald's theme tune* I'm lovin' it!

But seriously, this is really good. I want to know what happens next! I'm also quite lame so I say clichés like that!

The story's got a really good intro so far, and the characters a really interesting, so please--for the good of HPFF-kind--WRITE MORE :)

I gave it a 9/10 because I'm psychotic and I got a bit confused at the start. I was like, 'Wait a second, Regulus Black died...and neither he or Sirius had kids... OH WAIT I get it now ;)'

Haha anyway love the story, keep writing!

Author's Response: *ba da ba da da* :)

If you want to know what happens next, the good news is, half of the next chapter is written. The bad news is... half of the next chapter is written, and the other half is not.

But thank you so much for wanting more!

Oh, was the beginning confusing? I didn't mean for it to be that way! Well, I did, for like a moment, when you're like, "Wait - was that REGULUS BLACK?!?!" But then I wanted you all to be, "Wow, that's REGULUS BLACK!!!"

Thanks for the lovely review!

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